A house

[dominiquelaksmana]

hi friends,
this is my recent work, please ignore the background, i know it's a little bit empty. other than that, please do comment. thanks

[zahir3d]

Very nice render, very realistic.

[greg04]

i may not know much about palm trees /i live in a non palm country/ but these palm trees are really plastic looking.
there is a plastic palm tree in the middle of Warsaw but this may not be the case.
kerb maping on the bend is a bit too much i think.
otherwise the image is really good

[posterus]

wow! it looks great. nice job with the lighting, it really sets the mood. my only comments are nit picky things like the plants in the left forground could use a little desaturation, where is the light coming from on them...the sidewalk?
also your raod texture looks a bit too uniform.
-joe

[mcvltd]

Very nice. Love the lighting on the house and those cars look really great. My crits are (same as others have pointed out) - more variation in the road matl, less plastic trees. Other than that it's most impressive!

Rob.

[filip]

hi dominique, I think it is very nice rendering, I like this night atmosphere. I would just put some mapped horizont silhouette-trees to your background horizontal line (grass/sky background border)...

[dominiquelaksmana]

Thanks for the comments guys!!!


zahir 3d: thanks man, thank you

greg04 : i will try to amend these plastic trees and the mapping for the roadside. anyway the road side is not mapped on the bend, i intrude (is this term correct? extrude, intrude_ :P) the kerb. will fix that. oh thanks by the way!

posterus : note taken, the road and the saturated palmtree on the upper left. Thanks!

mcvltd : hey thanks man, hehe i will do that.


filip : i will follow your advise. thanks man..

really appreciate your comments guys, the conclusions are:
-plastic trees,
-saturated trees as well on the upperleft
-roadmap too uniform,
-put silhouette trees for background (horizon)
-map on the bending kerb..

anyway, the client called, he wants some changes to be made so, i think i will do this. anything to add guys??

thanks!!

[chris-x//]

looking great, except as already told the road material. The yellow lines are really way too saturated.

good luck

[Andre Tobo]

Hey man, Great work - Night shoots are always beautifull.

I agree about yellow line and I would try something in your horizon...

Regards.

[MHenry]

Hi Dominique,

Nice Rendering! Your lighting looks great!

[dominiquelaksmana]

hi fellas,

MHenry, thanks man
Andre Tobo, note taken,and rectify, don't know this one is better or worse.
chris, this is the revision

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[priad]

great night shot!

[Morbid Angel]

may maxwell rest in peace


another great work!

[gadzooks]

Nice

[Clifton Santiago]

Looks really great. The only thing I can think of to overall improve the realism would be to overexpose the interior lighting.

These aren't great photos, but they show the idea:

http://www.citypromenade.com/p04.jpg
http://www.citypromenade.com/p03.jpg