Angela House

[Macker]

Looking really good, though I would say the bedroom is a bit under-exposed.

[glorybound]

I agree, but shooting into a wall of windows is hard to balance. Maybe, i can push the light up.

Looking really good, though I would say the bedroom is a bit under-exposed.

[MoonDoggie]

This has to be one of your best clients Bobby. Looks great.

[glorybound]

Thanks, Colin. I haven't heard back yet. He probably ran out of red ink.

[glorybound]

Still haven't heard back, other than he is swamped. Here, are some high resolution proofs.

[joconnell]

The starglow in the two seem a wee bit unnatural to me, I'd say it could even be the data being fed into them though. I presume the actual light itself is a flat vray light? The totally uniform colour is feeding into the star glow and leaving it with a very "simple" look. If you'd a plane with a hdr of a similar light fitting mapped to it, there'd be more detail and difference in values in there for the glow to work with which might make it a bit more broken up and organic.

Again, top marks on the renders.

[stevesideas]

Definitely much more subtlety on the star glow...possibly even use a different method. Check out some photos to see what these spots actually look like in real life.

Also, I noticed the recessed ceiling in the hallway has visible polys. I would turbosmooth or up the iterations on that mesh as it is quite prominent in the scene.

[3LP]

For me, there is too much vignette as well.

Stan

[glorybound]

Here, is a high resolution for the kitchen

[glorybound]

Bathroom and bedroom

[flino2004]

The bedroom looks very good...My comment on that one is that I think will look better without the floor lamp.
regarding the bathroom, the blue color on the walls is not the best one for that space IMO.

how about some accessories for the side tables?

[glorybound]

I finally got some information for the exterior.

[3LP]

Looks good!
Stan

[flino2004]

I like it a lot in general but there are three things that I would change.
-the gravel area with plants around is weird.
-the plants under the windows on the right look repeated and no variation in height.
-I would bring your interiors in here, you can see thru (it looks empty)

[glorybound]

Yes. I requested more info on that gravel/grass area in the front; the plans were not clear. I started bringing the interior in, but it got late, so I thought I would leave it for later. Like the gravel/grass, the bushes on the right side were not clear and I asked for clarity.