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Hi
Like so many, I’m new to V-Ray. Ive just finished going through the manual. This is my first attempt at a proper scene.
I’m just experimenting with V-Ray sun and textures. Ive come from Podium, so finding V-Ray quiet overwelming.

I would love you guy to crit this

Don’t be afraid to tear this apart. I want to get good at this. ;D

Cheers
Jonathan

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Hi Jonathan, very good first post! The materials looks correct, I like that, just that bar has some repetitive texture. And maybe if you put the sun from the left side, you will get more light inside from those big windows, because your background looks like a bright day. But that’s just a personal opinion.
Congratulations!

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wow very nice first attempt, i remember my first render and its far away from your quality, congrats,keep practicing and i think your going to do some great renders!!

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Like first post whats looks great, keep practicing :wink:

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Very nice!
Only thing I’d like to point out is the wood’s bumpmap. It’s too strong. It’d look better if it where more subtle.

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@stefanq
Your right that texture on the bar is way to small and tiled. I dont really have any large wood textures. Ive just purchased the Arroway collection. but still waiting for it in the mail. I agree the interior looks a little dull. It does need some light to pour in.

@Teofas
You helped me on this image. Im using your visopt. At the moment Im going through your settings to totally understand it. I love your images.

@Simas
Cheers for the encouraging words.

@thomthom
I’ll tone that bumpmap down. Thanks for the advise.

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very nice renders, the plastic is so great! :smile:

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Very good, for a first render!
I didn’t understood if the black rectangular on the wall is intentionally all black?

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Hi 40th
The purpose for the model was to learn V-Ray settings. I got carried away and modeled too much=longer render times. The black rectangle was supposed to be a painting. Just never got around to making a diffuse for it.

Cheers for your comments