Max6, Vray advanced. It’not finished, i have to work at the interior. thanks for comments !
Interesting Design… I like the grass, Love the watter.
good start, it doesnt look bright enough considering it is an outdoor scene.
Chris Jackson
I like it, but:
I think the ball is way too small (if it is a soccerball) :lol: .
I think the door could use some work, it is too flat and maybe some glossies. And the tiling of the concreet is too obvious, maybe you could use a blend material for this (someone else pointed out this trick here on the forum). These are easy things to change to make this a much better render. Oh, and I agree with Chris about the brightness.
gr.
B
Looks like the tide is out in the pool. :lol:
Need to fill the background up so you cant see the horizon
Ken
Second try
I think it’s better now.
that looks a lot better with the brightness increased
Water looks awesome, except at the edges. It should be rippled where it meets the side walls of the pool. Looks nice otherwise.
looking better, are you using hsv colour mapping? try to us linear colour mapping to get some better contrast between light ans shadows.
Chris Jackson
cj@arcad.co.nz
i think you need to add a wall or trees or something in the background that horizon is just…freaky or something being open like that. maybe even some distant mountains or something.
please post ur settings of the water!!! its wonderful… 
a new one !
great, but personally I liked the door better and the chairs in your first post (but then make them a little more wood like)
And I still find the ball a little odd, dont know why. Maybe the color and the shadows, it looks a bit like it is flowting in the air.
But the glass for instance is MUCH bettr this way.
/B
im a student architecture, if we design something the first thing the architects then ussually do is questioning the logic in the design
and now i see a design of someone else i kinda feel todo the same.
first of all..i just love the water..looks great 
but then i come tot he building and i wonder.. why you use two different kinds of arches on the left side witht he glass and the point outside? i think it would be more logic to use twice the same arch only a bit longer on the outside to keep the triangle in it
aswell why you put a mondriaan in a realistic building? kinda contradictional i think
but further i just like the idea of using arches aswell with straight lines. aswell giving the door a more ‘open’ feeling