I photographed beer large format for a number of years for magazines, outdoor, etc. Bottles were always prepped with a combination of spray and individually placed droplets. Years of testing found that a combination of glycerine and water typically made the best look. However, this would only last so long before drying out, and would not always survive a film processing run. Would prep at least 3 or more bottles. Would light with a stand-in.
I might consider making more of the drops asymmetrical. Larger droplets typically make a slight teardrop shape rather than a sphere. We would always strive to have some the drops blended together, or even to have a “run” or two where the droplets blended together into a bit of a vertical line a few mm to a cm or so long. We used to say bottles that only had a bunch of round droplets had chicken pox.
We would also frequently include slush as well. I like a hint of slush, not much, but just droplets can look a little drab. A couple pieces of slush on the neck and one or two at the base usually looks nice. Sometimes a little on the cap as well.
As for the rendering the area that pops out to me right away is right around the cap. Directly under the cap is very bright and even.
I would consider a graduation on the card behind the bottle as well, like more of a hot spot in the middle with fall off. Possibly a little hand painted variance in the card as well (or low frequency noise).
I prefer a little bit more round sculpting to the lighting as well, like on the Krombacher bottle, but I know you are going for a slightly different look.
The lights or bounce cards that are making the subtle reflections on the front of the bottle might benefit from being soft edged on one side, where they show up near the middle of the bottle. (Maybe just one of them). I find the dark stripe created by the space between those cards a little distracting.
Love the suggestion above about more variance in the glass.
An additional tiny light slightly off to one side set to add a hint of a catch light to the droplets might be nice too. Just a little ping to know they are wet and round. This is easy to over do, though. Subtlety is key.
Looks really nice. It’s easy for any of us to make suggestions, difficult to actually make something great. Keep it up.