Bom (good) ou mal (Bad)?

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Re: Bom (good) ou mal (Bad)?

RTHR! First of all welcome ;D
I think your image is quite good!
I really love the green table for the sink, and - god - the toilet paper: best thing ever! You’re a really funny man ;D
Though, there are a few little things you can adjust (IMHO) to encrease realism, if that’s your aim (but i think your render can honestly be a great starting point to communicate your ideas).

1. I would change the wood texture: it doesn’t seem good enough to me to get real wood;
2. perhaps, i’d remove your sunflowers: they’re kind of funny, but they look a little cartoonish;
3. the nap before the toilet is too flat, to me..You could just work a little with displacement, or you could take a look here (http://www.accustudio.com/exchange/textures.php?dir=) to find some interesting nap textures
4. I would rather use a two point perspective, in a scene like this, just to obtain parallel vertical lines;
5. I’d very like to see something in the rear wall that reflects in the mirror!
6. Take care of the little dis-alignment between floor and wall tiles (in real world - i can say 'cos i’m an architect - workers align tiles to a corner, in this case it could be your upper-left.

REAL GOOD COLLECTION OF SHOES MAN!

Keep up the good work, i really want to see this image proceeding!

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Re: Bom (good) ou mal (Bad)?

Hello pibuz,

I am a student of Architecture and Brazilian unfortunately not Domino well as English, to understand a little, and do not understand that use a translator online.

Thank your comments and I will try to learn from it. The bathroom should be done with the minimum of cost possible, why is so simple.

In wood, I really noticed this and in relation to the floor, it is aligned in SU but when using vray, it goes like this.

The sunflower was only now occupy space.

Ps. I am using a translator would ask in English. :B

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Eu sou estudante de Arquitetura Brasileiro e infelizmente não domino bem o inglês, consigo entender um pouco, e o que não entendo uso um tradutor online.

Agradeço os seus comentários e vou tentar aprender com ele. Este banheiro deverá ser feito com o mínimo de custo possível, por isso está simples assim.

Quanto a madeira, realmente eu notei isto e em relação ao piso, ele está alinhado no SU mas quando uso o vray, ele fica desse jeito.

O girassol foi só pra ocupar espaço.

Ps. Estou usando um tradutor pra colocar em inglês. :B

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I agree that this is a nice render. My only comment would be to line up the wall tile with the floor tile.

Scott