Box pencil

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Hello friends!
I did this image for a campaign of a college in Brazil.
The creative concept is ’ Present at the least and biggest moments of your life '.
Suggestions and critical are welcome.
I want to improve the image for the final work.
OBS: the photos of the persons will be produced.
I used 3dmax 2009 and vray 1.5 sp2 and photoshop post production.

Thanks everybody.

New web site: www.marcosdiretordearte.com.br

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2

I like it.

I’m not sure the crayon is convincing, and the two pencils being identical (except for color) is a CG giveaway. The pencils should have different lead lengths, and perhaps add a paper wrapper to the crayon.

3

box pencil

Dynedain
I used references that I have in brazil. Anyway thanks for tips!
I will try to fix it.

4

Nice, the cardboard texture on the box inside is good. I agree the pencils are too similar, even rotating one of them slightly will help.

5

very nice textures and render :slight_smile:

6

Looks good. I do agree with Dynedain though, the crayon looks a little off. Maybe a paper branding wrapped around the side would help. And perhaps maybe a slight random rotation of each one as well. Anyway, just my 2 cents. Looks very believable as is. Again nice work.