Canary Wharf Office Interior

Just finished this image and wanted a bit of feedback from you all…

Cheers,
Olly

Hi Olly,

in general i think the image is good, but i also think its lacking light warmth and colour.

I took out a lot of the colour cast from the sun, maybe I went too far!

clean render ! good

id put something more interesting on the lcd’s
and yes a little more warmth

and while a cool texture i doubt the chair backs look like that?

I like the image very much. It looks very cool and realistic. But from a practical design point of view, have you ever tried to work on your pc when there is so much light in the room and on the screen?

All valid comments.

LCD’s are driven by the client.

I’d like to add some blinds to deal with your comment DVP3D, but they’re keen to show the view.

I’ll post an update in a bit…

nice images but in front chair is something wrong with green back and LCD screens are boring :wink:

Here’s the updated image, taking on board the some of the comments:

Let me know what you think of the changes…

hcpiter: something wrong with green back
I’m not sure what you mean. Can you clarify?

Thanks,
Olly

Np :slight_smile:

In red square.

clarify? :slight_smile:

I see what you mean, it’s correct though.

The fabric is a membrane under tension, held in place by the sides of the frame.

I think there may be something up with your background photo. On the far left hand side of the image - is your photo is beginning to be tiled again?

Otherwise its a top image, very clean. Could do with some people though?

A

Yep, I just spotted that myself. Thanks.

I’ll have a look at some people now…

I’ve added people as requested. Not sure if they work or not?

Cheers,
Olly

I think the girl is too small, also you should tweak the color of her a bit in PS, so it will match your lighting.

The girl definitely works :smile:

…works the streets

The girl might be a bit small but I think it is more that her perspective is not right so it will always look a bit odd. She should also be more side-lit, and a wee bit darker overall.

b

IMO the girl works but is a bit “pasty”(too white) for my liking compared to the rest of the image. Try color balancing her within photoshop(add a touch of red maybe?). She may be a bit small as well.

Overall an excellent render though! The two guys in the back work without flaw!

How’s this?