# Classroom

**URL:** <https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810>\
**Category:** Gallery\
**Created:** [May 29, 2009, 2:43pm UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810 "2009-05-29T14:43:14Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 15\
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**Author:** ![olly](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/chaosprd/user_avatar/forums.chaos.com/olly/32/71224_2.png) [@olly](https://forums.chaos.com/u/olly)\
**Post date:** [May 29, 2009, 2:43pm UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/1 "2009-05-29T14:43:14Z")

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Been working on this image today and thought I’d post it here to get a bit of industry feedback.

Don’t hold back…

Cheers,  
Olly

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**Author:** ![MikeeMax](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/838e76/32.png) [@MikeeMax](https://forums.chaos.com/u/MikeeMax)\
**Post date:** [May 29, 2009, 2:51pm UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/2 "2009-05-29T14:51:52Z")

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this image is very nice. the ceiling wood seems a bit too different from the walls for my taste.  
and the outside sky image looks a tiny bit overexposed compared to the lighting inside the room.  
again it is a very very clean image for me.  
congrats

but you stole it from the vray forum .

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**Author:** ![olly](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/chaosprd/user_avatar/forums.chaos.com/olly/32/71224_2.png) [@olly](https://forums.chaos.com/u/olly)\
**Post date:** [May 29, 2009, 3:05pm UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/3 "2009-05-29T15:05:58Z")

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> [@pixela](#):
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> but you stole it from the vray forum .

Gotta look after your work… 😉

BTW, thanks for the nice comments.

Cheers,  
Olly

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**Author:** ![jamesf73](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/j/ba8739/32.png) [@jamesf73](https://forums.chaos.com/u/jamesf73)\
**Post date:** [May 29, 2009, 3:08pm UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/4 "2009-05-29T15:08:53Z")

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superb image. don’t like the white square on the wall though

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**Author:** ![sv](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/chaosprd/user_avatar/forums.chaos.com/sv/32/4186_2.png) [@sv](https://forums.chaos.com/u/sv)\
**Post date:** [May 29, 2009, 3:18pm UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/5 "2009-05-29T15:18:40Z")

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awesome…

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**Author:** ![olly](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/chaosprd/user_avatar/forums.chaos.com/olly/32/71224_2.png) [@olly](https://forums.chaos.com/u/olly)\
**Post date:** [May 29, 2009, 5:34pm UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/6 "2009-05-29T17:34:23Z")

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Here’s an update:

Let me know if it’s gone in the right direction…

Cheers,  
Olly

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**Author:** ![elivnA](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/e/ce73a5/32.png) [@elivnA](https://forums.chaos.com/u/elivnA)\
**Post date:** [May 29, 2009, 6:34pm UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/7 "2009-05-29T18:34:47Z")

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> [@vlado](#):
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> Here’s an update:
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> Let me know if it’s gone in the right direction…
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> Cheers,  
> Olly

There’s too much wood i’d say. Get some nice stone on the floor or something 😄

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**Author:** ![Da\_elf](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/chaosprd/user_avatar/forums.chaos.com/da_elf/32/44038_2.png) [@Da\_elf](https://forums.chaos.com/u/Da_elf)\
**Post date:** [May 29, 2009, 8:07pm UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/8 "2009-05-29T20:07:11Z")

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so if a kid goes missing the cliff is the 1st place they look?

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**Author:** ![olly](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/chaosprd/user_avatar/forums.chaos.com/olly/32/71224_2.png) [@olly](https://forums.chaos.com/u/olly)\
**Post date:** [May 29, 2009, 8:33pm UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/9 "2009-05-29T20:33:26Z")

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> [@REDVERTEX](#):
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> There’s too much wood i’d say. Get some nice stone on the floor or something 😄

I might give it a go when I get a minute, but the wood is as spec’d.

> [@3DMK](#):
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> so if a kid goes missing the cliff is the 1st place they look?

Something like that. 😉

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**Author:** ![peakyfreak80](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/bb73d2/32.png) [@peakyfreak80](https://forums.chaos.com/u/peakyfreak80)\
**Post date:** [May 29, 2009, 8:53pm UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/10 "2009-05-29T20:53:23Z")

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Talk about a distracting view. There’s no way I could stay focused on learning in a room like that! 🙂

As the image goes, I agree about the plethora of wood. Walls and ceiling look nice, but maybe something different for the floor. Also, with something so simple, you might want to add more detail where you can, like around the windows or on the concrete outside.

peakyfreak

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**Author:** ![PIXELBOX\_SRO](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/97f17d/32.png) [@PIXELBOX\_SRO](https://forums.chaos.com/u/PIXELBOX_SRO)\
**Post date:** [May 30, 2009, 9:50am UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/11 "2009-05-30T09:50:27Z")

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nice one really!!! congrats

kinda wondering about your lighting…is it HDRI in the environment and some area light in the window???..curious as the visible shadows r strangely angled if it was a direct light…

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**Author:** ![voltron7](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/chaosprd/user_avatar/forums.chaos.com/voltron7/32/39008_2.png) [@voltron7](https://forums.chaos.com/u/voltron7)\
**Post date:** [May 31, 2009, 6:11pm UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/12 "2009-05-31T18:11:38Z")

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Looks great Olly. My only comments to add, are that the door hinges look very tiny and the wall that the window is in looks quite thin. Materials and lighting look really nice and warm.

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**Author:** ![MHenry](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/b5a626/32.png) [@MHenry](https://forums.chaos.com/u/MHenry)\
**Post date:** [June 1, 2009, 4:41am UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/13 "2009-06-01T04:41:00Z")

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Nice clean render.

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**Author:** ![olly](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/chaosprd/user_avatar/forums.chaos.com/olly/32/71224_2.png) [@olly](https://forums.chaos.com/u/olly)\
**Post date:** [June 1, 2009, 8:41am UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/14 "2009-06-01T08:41:30Z")

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> [@sea2stars](#):
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> My only comments to add, are that the door hinges look very tiny and the wall that the window is in looks quite thin.

I’m pretty sure the wall and hinges are the correct size, but will look into it…

> [@Intrinsia](#):
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> kinda wondering about your lighting…

It’s just a light blue in the env colour slot…

Cheers,  
Olly

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**Author:** ![thablanch](https://dub1.discourse-cdn.com/chaosprd/user_avatar/forums.chaos.com/thablanch/32/102_2.png) [@thablanch](https://forums.chaos.com/u/thablanch)\
**Post date:** [June 1, 2009, 11:58am UTC](https://forums.chaos.com/t/classroom/20810/15 "2009-06-01T11:58:59Z")

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Nice exterior / interior balance…
