Here the second part of the concept store posted before,
C&C welcome.
Gorgeous floor and gorgeous girls 
Nice one. Maybe you can color balance the 2 girls on the left, one is too yellow and another is too green (slightly)
The rendering is great. The girls at the counter integrate seamlessly while the one on the right looks odd, removing her completely wouldn’t harm the image. What i find really interesting is the amount of detail in your background, what exactly is seen through the glass, is it all modeled?
VERY nice
Yeah the girl on the right is too dark and a tad too small me thinks
Thanks, glad you love the girls eheheh, I have spend hours to found them, if you see well you can see a guy who watches the girls bihind the glass 
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I’m not very happy too with the color matching for them.
the right side girl hide a bad thing, that’s why IMO she’s too much.
pailhead: the background is mixed: plane + mapping and modeling like the ceiling and some little detail to made it better.
Girl on the right looks like shes just filled her bag with shoes and is trying to sneak out. I dont trust chicks who wear sunnies while shopping!
The clients had an anxious attack when seen this haha :lol: , and I’ll repost the finish soon.
You are totaly right!