Fast rendering for presentation

[jackieteh]

Hi, here is a very fast work asking from a architect firm, saying they need this piece for presentation, thank you to vray next fast rendering engine.

[glorybound]

It looks good, but compositionally, that Prius stops my eye, so unless it is there for another reason, I would move it.

[jackieteh]

@glorybound

It looks good, but compositionally, that Prius stops my eye, so unless it is there for another reason, I would move it.

Bobby, you are the one who always reply my post, touch and thank you very much, i will remove the car…as i mention, this is a very fast job and lake of detail, so i put the car there to block something don’t look right there…

[glorybound]

My pleasure. Over the last decade, this forum has helped me improve my skills greatly, so I am the old timer hanging around to help others, repaying my debt :). It does frustrate me when I see dozens of views to something without any responses.

[glorybound]

I think of composition as making the viewer go to your focal point. High contrast is an easy way and you use other things to guide you to that point, like the way you might position cars, fences, tree, or other things strategically placed in your image. Making your image black and white and using levels to blow things out helps.

[jackieteh]

@glorybound

I think of composition as making the viewer go to your focal point. High contrast is an easy way and you use other things to guide you to that point, like the way you might position cars, fences, tree, or other things strategically placed in your image. Making your image black and white and using levels to blow things out helps.

" Making your image black and white and using levels to blow things out helps." how? do you mean my image is not contrast??

i still have too much to learn from others…

[jackieteh]

@glorybound

No, I mean to look at the composition of the image. Here is one I just finished. I turned it black and white and I adjusted levels so I can see where my brightest part of the image is. Your viewer’s eye will go to the brightest spots. The rock has white highlights and then my entrance door has light on it. With the canopy shadows, the door is highlighted.

This is how I work, anyway.

you make your image black and white by desaturate your image, apply level and then pull the black point to the right?
let say if this image, the highlight is not at the rock and entarnce door, what will you do?

[glorybound]

Something has to be the focal point. I put the stone there to catch the light and I move the sun around until I got light on my front door.

[PIXELBOX_SRO]

@glorybound

My pleasure. Over the last decade, this forum has helped me improve my skills greatly, so I am the old timer hanging around to help others, repaying my debt :). It does frustrate me when I see dozens of views to something without any responses.

reason being probably that way too many people are using different means of showing their stuff. Behance, FB groups, Instagram, etc. Another possibility this happens is that people browse through forum through their phones and dotn bother to reply in the image gallery - they just browse through it

Jackieteh:
i agree with Bobby about the car. Otherwise looking good!

[jackieteh]

@glorybound

Something has to be the focal point. I put the stone there to catch the light and I move the sun around until I got light on my front door.

i think i get what you mean here, thank you for your time

[jackieteh]

@PIXELBOX_SRO

reason being probably that way too many people are using different means of showing their stuff. Behance, FB groups, Instagram, etc. Another possibility this happens is that people browse through forum through their phones and dotn bother to reply in the image gallery - they just browse through it

Jackieteh:
i agree with Bobby about the car. Otherwise looking good!

you have a very nice website, got a lot of nice 3d images…i like it very much.

[PIXELBOX_SRO]

Thank you Jackie