Still a laundry list of things to do with this, but figured I’d put it up for some critique and suggestions…
Mirrors are still to be added, as well as tire texturing/displacement…
Thanks,
Andrew
This doesnt really have anything to do with the lighting or rendering but the car model looks too soft. i think the edges are just not precise enough, giving the shape a ‘clay’ type feel.
easily fixed tho…subD modeling i assume?
i wish i cud model that.. but u should do something with the glass material.. then the carpaint or maybe its just a FUBARed HDRI?? i dunno.. but i wish i cud model a car.. i like u model a lot!
Thanks for the replies… I put several more hours into this… Here’s the newest rendering:
Hope to hear what you all think.
-Andrew
what can i say…it sucks.
opps. forgot we are supposed to be supportive in here so ill put on a smile and say it looks decent. But i cant say it looks good. you should learn to handle a 35mm camera better. heheeh (this is my funny way of saying your image looks great)
well, i like this. Maybe you should look into improving the metal material on your tires, looks slightly plasticly.. Not that i know HOW you should make it look like aluminium 
I like this model - a lot!
Great improvement! Maybe a very soft side light to bring out the black ties a bit…very minor point tho’. Good job!
Dean