better than the first pic..
some of the pillows look like they are going inside the sofa..
the glass of the table doesn’t reflect anything
clean render anyway…
image looking very good, but your direct light is too close to the scene.
When you use area shadows, your direct light will act as a spot light eg the shadows will not be parralel. Moving your direct light away from the scene and changing your area shadow setting (much higher), the shadows converge less and thus seem more parralel.