MODERN EXTERIOR - any comments to improve?

ABOUT THE PIC:
*its just a preview visoft
*not yet photoshop specially on the grass
*not yet edited just a preview
*obviously not final render (im going to use veri good visoft -eventhough it takes long to render and load)
*no Ambient Onclussion yet ..thats why ..its not yet detailed :smile:

SO What should we do?
*please make a comment what should i do to improve the residential presentation.. is the perspective view ok? the lightning and shadows ok? the location of landscape ok? the color ok? the textures ok? the background ok? etc..

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no reply? but 20+ views?

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can you post the pic on the site please, not external link please

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can u see the image now?

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no.. what i meant , you need to copy the image code onto your post buddy

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now its done. the image is properly seen

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thank… i can see it. well done

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angle looks little weird, forced view, try an eye level view or something. window frame looks like stainless steel edit material , overall colors looking good, some materials need more work, asphalt, stone cladding, needs a bump or displacement, lighting & shadow looks perfect for exterior, some spots or noise on the darker material, grass needs bump, too much reflection on the windows, try a different glass for the window perhaps

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OMG.. thanks a lot of your comment sir.. the shadow and grass is not yet been final. so you mean mans eye view :smile: ..and yes its stainless thx :smile: im going to work on asphalt .and stone cladding thx sir.

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hope the advice helps buddy.. happy rendering, im looking forward to you improve renders

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yeah the angle is the biggest concern with this image…if you actually divide it up on screen, the weakest parts of the rendering (the grass & Concrete) take up about 1/3 of your image. That is not necessarily good. Make the building your focus, because that has a lot more interest and quality to it. Good start though. Keep pushing