MY FIRST INTERIOR POST FOR C&C

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Hi, posting my first interior render , comments & crits would be really helpful, thanks :wink:

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Looks great for a first interior on Vray. Congrats!

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Yes really cool for the firstā€¦ :wink:
Maybe you will have to reduce a bit the bump map on the door material.

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nice one to be a first interiorā€¦ congrats!!!

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Great job for a first time.
The Bg looks odd to me. The curtains are too opaque IMHO make them vray2sided material.

I like the noguchi table can you share it or if you know where can I find one.

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hi 40TH

http://sketchup.google.com/3dwarehouse/details?mid=a7809c62e26301e08850ff5e612b6198&prevstart=0

Edmon242004

Congratulations, nice work :wink:

Castro

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Thanks Castro, But it looks chunky. And Iā€™m too lazy to make it myself ::slight_smile: :smile:

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Excellent render for the first try my first interior render it was really terrible. And keep improving and posting this a community where you can grow very fast.

40th i have that coffe table and i can defenetly share with you. send me a personal message with your email. :slight_smile:

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daaamn nice and realisticā€¦
furnitureā€™s cushions look soo clean, sharp and ā€œnoiselessā€ā€¦
illumination is fine too, but you reaally need a nice backgroundā€¦

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hi everybody, thanks for the crits and comments, I will adjust somethings then post the final render.. :smile:

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-maybe some displacement on the carpets?
-soften the shadows just a little bit
-some interior lighting would go a long way

well done, what material did you use for the glass on the noguchi table?

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Thanks for the pointers omega, the glass on the table is a transparent texture with the fog enabled.