Hello , this is a past work that I made for a client, critiscs welcome.
Onz
Pretty good…I would raise a camera a bit so you don’t get that pointy angle at the top, unless you really wanted it.
And that “ivy” plant on the wall, I would make the texture less saturated - green, more to dark and desaturated green, it stands out too much and it takes away the realism.
I like the front ‘glass’ panel, well done.
(and I personally do not like the sky image)
Nice work. I like the camera angle and the glass looks sweet. I think your render is a little to clean and could use a little VRay dirt or some AO. The plant life looks a little to CG IMO (I like the placement of the vegitation but think you should work on the materials a little bit).
thx a lot!! i will try to fix that thing an repost!!
Thx again!
onz