nothing new just revisions of an old proposal

(imho) i’m not happy with this render bec. ive done it according to their design(another company) and i’m revising this kitchen for so long.

just like to post it anyway, anycrits are welcome…
cheers jds

revised kitchen R6 gallery villas (Dubai Sports City)

Re: nothing new just revisions of an old proposal

good stuff!!! keep them coming.

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Looks nice. I wonder how would it looked if you turned on the lights.
Nice curtains, what tools did you used to model them?

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It’s OK Jeff…we know what you can do. Still, this it’s a good rendering, very clean as usual!
Regards,
Stefan

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Posted by: Chisel
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good stuff!!! keep them coming.

thanks dude

Posted by: 40th
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Looks nice. I wonder how would it looked if you turned on the lights.
Nice curtains, what tools did you used to model them?

they want it a day scene and i can remember i also rendered a night scene of this kitchen before.. thanks
about the curtain its 3ds check the models from http://www.archidom.net/ lots of good models are here even curtains but use only few bec. its heavy

Posted on: Today at 01:38:59 AMPosted by: stefanq
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It’s OK Jeff…we know what you can do. Still, this it’s a good rendering, very clean as usual!
Regards,
Stefan

thanks stefan i really like to post more but im always attending meetings and doing sharp drawings thats why only revisions of this renders are the one making me busy…
i like it a bit but im still looking for something extra ordinary.. thanks for the comments

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Santos,
great to see your works again. wait too long!!!
very nice & sharp rendering as before. : )

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Great job, very realistic. My only criticism is possibly the curtain to the left of the 1st image, needs a little transparency and less saturation imo

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hi jeff,

welcome back.. busy? where have you been? as for rendering, i think its ok and clean as usual. but it can be great if you have more time i guess.

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Good images…this is very nit picky, but I’m not really convinced by the woodwork. It looks as though everything is one piece of wood, which in the real world it wouldn’t be. There would be some sort of joinery within the construction. Also, the “single pieces” would be most likely made of 2-3 boards glued together, so you’d have breaks in the wood pattern.

You’ve got a bunch of “stuff” in there, which makes things really look much more natural. Even the things that most architects would rather not see like the air registers are there, which makes it convincing.

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thanks to all ill reply to the updated post…limited time to reply bec. of my boss thanks :frowning:

sir dolomar thanks for commenting.. yah you are right i didnt see that… next time ill adjust.. i already have a new post before i saw your reply thanks..

Re: nothing new just revisions of an old proposal

Really nice. Keep it up.