Office

[kehlje]

Hello, I am working on some renderings for a friend’s first design project. It is a contemporary office located in China. Here’s a second pass at the rendering of an interior working area. The material concept is one side neutral, one side wood textures. What do you guys think—any suggestions to improve the image?

Thanks in advance for your eye.

[JonGon]

Love the design and concept of this office. Great selection on the cutout people but I did notice a few odd things. The desk on the left seems to be floating off the floor and the older gentleman holding the tablet is cut off way to early before receding behind the desk. These are just small details to look out for but great lighting and render nonetheless.

[kehlje]

Jon, thanks so much! Funny how these obvious details escape me. Thanks for catching them.

[kehlje]

Here is a second pass at the next view along with a revised workspace image.

[JonGon]

I couldn’t help but notice this.

The computer chair is cutting through the desk. Also, i’m not sure if the the desk is designed this way but it seems to be floating.

Still a great design and beautiful render, keep up the great work.

[romullus]

I think you’re spot on with this quantum space theory. The evidence is everywhere :]

Good job nonetheless.

[kehlje]

Haha, thanks guys… I see I really need to start being more detail oriented and fastidious.

Here are a couple more images in the same ongoing project. How do you think I can improve the exterior? Thanks in advance!