sup ;D
so anyway my crappy internet has been down for AGESSS, so i thought i’d bash out a nice outdoor render trial with a few visopts ive been messing with, turns out this is quite an excellent render and i like it very much so 
comments and criticisms in and around my mouth.
superb
oh yeah and ignore the fact that you could probably walk off the edge quite easily and die… thanks ;D… and that the sunlounger on the left is floating, ignore that too ;D
haha x
Re: OUTDOOR?, YES PLEASE.
Including your signature thing, there are four different forms of profanity in your post. A little unnecessary and excessive don’t you think? With that said, I find it difficult to take you seriously. But I’ll try my best for some comments.
The render itself is quite clean. The materials could do with some better textures though. Try cgtextures for some nice textures and try creating some bump maps to add some depth and realism to the materials. Currently, the wood textures are very flat and the colours are a bit unrealistic.
The background needs some colour correction. Or could do with a different background… the image quality isn’t that great.
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I agree with stevebo.
There are so many ways to express yourself and explain your job… this is not my favourite.
Besides what Stevebo said (find some better textures, and i´ve never seen that kind of reflection on outdoor stone…it seems more like interiors tile…) there is no drama in your scene, maybe you could try a different environment and light source. It´s a good intuition to have some part strong enlighted and some other darker, you could work on it.
I like your camera shot, but you could try to force it quite a bit…
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hahah ermmm
well thankyou for the commments but im only 17 and i enjoy speaking like that
also my signature is the title of a song sooooooo ;D
im just fairly chilled when it comes to commenting on my renders and giving them file titles and stuff, sooo i dont really see what the issue is even though i can see the obvious profanities haha
everyone should be chilledddd haha
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hahha nicely done alrami, i hadnt even seen the edits on the post until you pointed it out 
you dont have to use swear words to appeal to me im not that socially inept where as i am only to reply if you speak my “teen language” hahah
i may only be 17 but i am fully aware of what i do haha
thanks anywayyyy 
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