I hope you don’t mind me commenting again, but I think what is realy missing in this scene are some more details, and a bit of colour.
For example, I don’t know too much about pool design, but I think there are usually some sort of water outlet detail all around the pool edge, and perhaps some sort of edging tile that has grouves in it all around the edge.
I think also, you could change the colour of the bottom of the pool so that it gives the water a bit more dynamic.
How about some sort of chrome rail to get in and out of the water?
On a more architecural not, I think the windows are a little fine (the fenistration), and in a pool situation wouldn’t you be able to open them?
Another little detail that as the most pedantic person in the world I would probably add would be the detail of the connection of the collumn to the ground. It looks a little like it was tiled before the collumn was installed at the moment!
One last thing that I think you will have to agree with is that if there were no lights in this sort of room it would be a dark place. Therefore, even if you don’t wnat to have them on, you will need to add them. I think these details will help.
I have to admit that I tend to like a more contrast-full image (I think I just made up a word!!) meaning that I would let the darks be a little darker, and the bright places burn so that you get the feeling that you are indoors looking out.
Don’t forget, when you look with your eyes round a room, and then out the window, the room feels bright, and then the outside doesn’t feel that much brighter. Our eyes are very cleaver little things that change the aperture (pupil in our eye) so that just the correct amount of light hits the optic nerve, making the inside, and the outside look similarly lit, even though one is actually much darker than the other.
I am really looking forward to you updating this one. I hope you manage to make it right.
Cheers,
