Procession house Stair

Hello,

Didn’t have time to post this render I finished the other week.

What do you think?
C&C’s welcome.

Looks good Geoff … the bump on the glass is very heavy :wink:

nice!
the only thing that bothers me is it looks like you used the same material on the doorframe / door surround as on the walls - it blends in a bit too much perhaps… but i suppose it doesn’t really matter as that’s not what the image is about really! :lol:

did you do much post work?

::edited for typo’s:: :roll:

I like it! :smile:
Too much grey for me in your render, need more contrast in it to reveal the stairs.
The stairs betwenn first and second floor is crazy :shock: ,you make good stairs.

sOreal: yeah I did use the same material on walls and door. I didn’t really want to distract drom the stair, but still wanted something there. Didn’t work!
A curves colour correction layer. Also I had a problem with one tread which was considerably lighter than the rest. Oh and a very low opacity blurred layer.

natty: I didn’t have any bump and it looked too perfect. Maybe I have overdone it a bit!

sweet image mate

Execellent! The atmosphere and spacial sense is well represented. I like its soft looking too. I recommend slightly to strengthen the contrast, but not to overdo of course.

The lack of colour in the building did bother me, but I suppose the stair does stand out a bit more.
I’ll try some more contrast on the image when I find out what is wrong with my machine! The CPU fan does not sound good on it at the moment.

Geoff