Remembering my younger days

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Old project that I remake in corona renderer for testing..with some greeneries improvements :smiley:

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interesting! Is everything rendered or some items are photos? those lamposts are not dirty or intergrated enough to be part of the scene…

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Hey spadestick thnks for the feedback!..About the image everything is 3d except the kids and the background mountain :)..

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Some updates..change the mood..so far I like it :smiley:

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Nice image. I like it too, but few things still bugging me.

  1. wires on electrical poles hanging in a unrealistic way. Look at attached image, yours hanging like in A example, while in real world they looks like in B example.
  2. tree on right looks a bit odd. Those extremely long and thin branches doesn’t look very convincing
  3. kids are rather poor integrated. At least some contact shadow is needed.
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Catenary - Wikipedia :wink:

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Hey thnks for the feedback.

For the pole I have two meeting point for the wires..so option B is not possible. Look at the image..or I need to change it to one meeting point.
Yes the trees i’m working on it..pain in the ass
And the kids i’m thinking about to find a better one..time will tell

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Option B is the way to do it. If you have two meeting points, just add another vertex to your spline and make them bezier corners, like option C.

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Thats what I did..(see pic). I did it the same as option C for the top one. Bottom one I still need to fix it.

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great job on the image all the textures look really great.

I woul only add some more detail to the surface where the ground meet either adding more bump or adding more rock and such. Looks a little flat and you can see the subtle fade of road to dirt.

check this image see how parts transition to each other http://images.singletracks.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/09/name-that-trail-1024x768.jpg

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Thnks Daniel. the subtle fade of road to dirt that’s what i wanted to achieve..u can even see some tire dirt marks on the road. So like a really old and worn out road that broke off from environment effect (rain, cars),
maybe Ill add more rocks. it all depends what sort of sand road u want. Theirs different types, but thnks for the feedback :smiley: