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I would greatly appreciate advice on how to improve these.

I have been busy with these for a while and they just seem to be look worst by the day.

One point - the developer wants no greenery in the development or scenes, so i don’t know how else to break the hard look it has at the moment.

Thanks

adddisplayfinal.jpg
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circulationfinalE.jpg
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entrancefinal.jpg
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something is looking quite bad with the clouds.

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Thanks jacksc02

I will look into it.
Personally i feel it needs more than just a different sky and was hoping for more pointers.

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hello !

my opinions :

a bit too yellow
sky is strange
viewpoint on the inner view is a little strange.
the crop of the horizontal view is a little odd as well.

basically, my phisolophy is that every image need to show “something” particular

good luck :slight_smile:

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A pointer… Maybe look into colormapping? It looks like thats where it went wrong… But can’t be sure

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A few pointers about the last pic…

1. the cropping: I think you should show the whole entrance instead of cropping the roof.
2. the view. Either raise your camera alot higher and make an aerial view, or lower it to eye-level. Now youre somewhere inbetween and it doesnt feel right (imo).
3. The light: The sun is behind the camera, which always makes it difficult to make an interesting image. I would move the sun alot either to the left or the right. That way you will get funkier shadows.

/k

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Thanks for all the pointers so far, now i am feeling I am learning and ready to make progress!!