That November mood...

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Good Morning everyone,

This is actually my first post to this section as I’ve always prefered to watch than to be watched..
But well today I am in the mood to show you one piece of the project I work on now (which are actually windows shades/nets) as it goes quite well with the current autumn weather outside..

It is still not the final piece, interior has to be finished and some details as well, but I think you may find it quite pleasant :smiley:

I will be happy to see your thoughts on it down below..

I will also post full project once its fully finished… So far it’s not about all the perfect technical details, but about that november mood … :wink:

Thank you for your time!

//UPDATE : You can find finished project here: https://www.behance.net/gallery/45797179/CLIMAX-set5

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Well done! I’d like to mention a few things that came to my mind:

  • the leaves on the lawn should be a bit more scattered
  • the leaves and flowers in the shadow-area look to bright and saturated to me
  • the reflection in the windows look a bit strange, because this single window reflects a blue sky
  • the leaves in the foreground: Premultiply-errors?
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Hello and thank you for ur insight. I think you are right on all of the points, I will work on it :smiley:

About the blue reflection, the hdri itself has some blue sky on it so probably that window is the only one reflecting it, which therefore appears to be wrong.. I will try desaturation on final piece there ..

Have a nice day!

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Hello again guys,

As I promised, here you can find finished project with all of the pictures I made.
Dont hesitate to comment with ur piece of opinion or advice:)

I hope it is ok to post behance website as its easier than uploading it here again:)

Thank you for ur time and ahve a nice week!

https://www.behance.net/gallery/45797179/CLIMAX-set5