wip- exterior-updated

still working on the scene-not finihed yet…
wanted to share it with you so I can achieve a better result.
all your c&c are welcome :slight_smile:

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what happen? ive seen your work before…and it was very good…i guess this is a very early wip…hehehe.

aa needs work…water material is available somewhere int the forum…and you could improve the lights..looks a little bit washed out…

yes it is a very early wip- dont worry. :lol:
I just wanted to send it so I can get feedback about lighting and camera angle or any other stuff while I am still working.
because otherwise, I always have too little time to make changes…

I have a problem with AA. when I use image sampling - adaptive or fixed rate- image gets too flat. cellular map on the walls dissappear etc…
this always happens in my scenes. I dont know how to make it better-working on that… :roll:
here is the anti-aliased image:

here is an update:

uh, it still looks a little washed out, mainly the front wall somehow, it doesnt seem that one part is closer.

I like your grass. Is that displacement?

Pool water is looking good, but for some reason the pools seems really shallow. You may need to place a ‘no diving’ sign or someone may get injured :wink:

-Matt

thanks for your replies :slight_smile:

the grass is displacement.

yeah the water looks shallow:) I guess this is due to refraction. the same happens near a real pool too.

about washed out: I cant fix the problem. when I make it darker then the whole image goes darker…and the image is no more a birght sunny day.
I will work on that more…

I think the main problem is that almost everything in the composition receives direct light.

Personally I would try rotating the sun about 170-180 degrees (assuming it is targeted) so that the main facade wont get direct light, would cast shadows on grass and create more dark/bright variety.