wips

Hi all.

These are sparetime images will continue adding changing etc in my lunch hour, would love you comments etc.
ta very much.

si.


for wip it looks not bad, its just that I think that you should not use such a wide anlge lense for the bathroom and in 2nd image is that table huge or is it a very small couch?

I would also raise the viewpoint in the first image. The doorhandle is above your camera which looks weird.

nice. nice lighting and materials.
the curtain blowing in the wind is a nice touch. are you going to add chairs to table?

Hi, great wip!

I would possibly remove a little of the bump/displacement you have on the tiles in the bathroom. I also agree with DVP3D’s comment regarding the wide angle of the lens.

I would also possibly not have the curtain blowing as much as you have shown, I would be worried about the vase on the table being knocked off! (that was my initial thought!) :stuck_out_tongue:

Other than that, great start!