Sale Gallery and office

[jackieteh]

Another fast work for a developer sale gallery and first floor office, total 8 perspective still images, but i choose 5 to post here, critique and comments are welcome.

[fixeighted]

The first and second look great but I'm not so keen on the others I'm afraid. A few odd things going on with some parts and don't look as polished as the first two.
Specifically I'd point to the foreground table in the 3rd image - it looks very flat....almost not actually part of the scene.
You could just edit the post and take the last 3 out
I have loads of images that were paid for but I think are SO awful that they will never see the light of day

[paulison]

The work looks very good to me. good detail and materiality

[jackieteh]

The first and second look great but I'm not so keen on the others I'm afraid. A few odd things going on with some parts and don't look as polished as the first two.
Specifically I'd point to the foreground table in the 3rd image - it looks very flat....almost not actually part of the scene.
You could just edit the post and take the last 3 out
I have loads of images that were paid for but I think are SO awful that they will never see the light of day

Thank you for your critics, but i will not take out the last 3 images, because i post my work here seeking for comments, so i can improve my skill in future, actually there are all 10 images for this project, i done it in 7 working days, all image are render in 2500px for presentation use, all i want to say is thank you for the vray fast render time. and the project is done finally.

you can see it here: http://www.temokin.com/ , of cause the real photo is much more pretty than my rendering, i hope one day i can do some 3d like Peter Guthrie and Bentrand Benoit, but i am still thinking how can i achieve the same result like them in short time, still haven't find away...may be it just my dream lol

[jackieteh]

The work looks very good to me. good detail and materiality

thank you for your comments, it's really give me some energy to continue my 3d journey...will continue improve my skills with youtube and google...lol