Summer Farm House

[glorybound]

I am not sold on this one yet. If you have any suggestion, please let me know.

[Leeds3D]

liking it alot generally Bobby. few thoughts for you (please take them as constructive and not a list of things i don't like!!) - the foreground tree to the left gets a bit lost in the background, perhaps due to it following the slope of the roof; the wood collumns are a touch over reflective (side of far left post for example) and might even do with a bit of a chamfer to the corners, they're very sharp edged; add a little dirt on the roof, and to a much lesser extent the cladding; seems a touch pinky/purple overall. loving your work, no idea how you seem to do so many!

[glorybound]

Thanks! I will take your comments into account. I usually chamfer everything, but I forgot on this one.

[Nicinus]

Agree, foreground tree seems a bit misplaced and it would be cleaner without it, but I think what prevents the picture from 'popping' is the dark porch. It may be correct light-wise, but it doesn't flatter the house.

[glorybound]

Here is an update... much better!

[glorybound]

Version 2

[glorybound]

I'll have to look at these in the morning. I'm not sure which of the last two I like best.

[OPEN_RANGE]

Looks great as is. If it was me I would likely add a second shrub type and intersperse that with the others. Like 2:1 existing with added specie. Maybe a landscape boulder or 2 or some flowers or something around the base of the small tree in the mulch? It looks lonely.

turn off the porch lights? Lights on in daytime seems a bit odd and energy wasteful imo.

The metal roofs are also what I notice. I think they are so reflective that they are reflecting the white siding and sky too much. They look white, and who uses white roofing?

[glorybound]

Yes, I agree with it all, mainly the overexposed metal roof.

[glorybound]

Another update

[glorybound]

I brightened it up a tad

[NorthVisualStudio]

Looks really nice! A few super picky observations/opinions;
1. The roof tiles could be brightened up a bit
2. The timber posts could have the sunlight on them brightened a bit
3. Maybe a bit of atmospheric depth could be added to the trees at the rear using a z depth pass in photoshop
4. The grass to the foreground could have a slight colour adjustment to to match the main grass
5. The sunlight on the grass to the rear has a slightly different tone to the grass in-front of the house
6. The single tree to the left - I would be tempted to scale it down a touch and moved to the left a bit so that the end of the lean-to can be seen a bit more
7. I would be tempted to use another sky
8. Could the blue chair behind the post (second from left) be moved slightly so it's not obscured?

[glorybound]

Looks really nice! A few super picky observations/opinions;
1. The roof tiles could be brightened up a bit
2. The timber posts could have the sunlight on them brightened a bit
3. Maybe a bit of atmospheric depth could be added to the trees at the rear using a z depth pass in photoshop
4. The grass to the foreground could have a slight colour adjustment to to match the main grass
5. The sunlight on the grass to the rear has a slightly different tone to the grass in-front of the house
6. The single tree to the left - I would be tempted to scale it down a touch and moved to the left a bit so that the end of the lean-to can be seen a bit more
7. I would be tempted to use another sky
8. Could the blue chair behind the post (second from left) be moved slightly so it's not obscured?

All good, especially moving that chair over to the left a bit.

[agrieveson]

How do you model the standing seam roof? Is it 3D or displacement?

[glorybound]

I modeled it. I started out with displacement, but I needed more control.