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    Another boring commercial exterior job.
    Last edited by Spikeadeliv; 22-08-2009, 12:49 PM.

  • #2
    Thats really quite good.

    I like the lighting and colors.

    Maybe change the forground tree on the left? Put a better one off to the right maybe.

    The 2nd floor window on the left isnt reflecting.

    Some flowers for color might be nice.

    Overall very nice job!

    -randy.
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    speedtree is evil

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    • #3
      nice image

      dont complain too much....at least you're doing 3d work

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      • #4
        I like the lighting and contrast but I'd like to see the colors desaturated a bit.
        Eric Boer
        Dev

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        • #5
          nice model. but it looks a tad bright to me. where is it supposed to be based. looks un-naturally bright. the reflections dont really match, plus you have loads of boring forground, either place a tree shadow across it or look at your cropping. plus some extra detail, dirt and cracks wouldnt go amiss.
          as i aways say, 10% 3d and 90% photoshop. get some gradients going to. to add light detail.
          Freelance TD/Generalist
          http://www.vanilla-box.co.uk

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          • #6
            All comments are noted, but as allways client comments over-ride all.

            So no cracks, brick colour exactly as is etc.

            3d work 1%, photoshop 99%, has been for the last 8 years old man.

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            • #7
              Originally posted by Spikeadeliv
              All comments are noted, but as allways client comments over-ride all.
              tell me about it. Pity they dont know squat. Would be easier without them
              Freelance TD/Generalist
              http://www.vanilla-box.co.uk

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