arbre vert WIP

[priad]

I just start this new project, the modeling isn't totaly perfectly finish, the texture and caustics have to be rework. And I need to add bubble inside.
Please, I need some comment to go in the right way.
So thank's for comment.

PS:Vray version 1.47.02 irmap first + lightcache.

[s0real]

i think you need to tone down the caustics A LOT!!!

the bottle currently looks as if it has no thickness - it looks like solid glass at the top.
i don't really like the angle of your shot i think it would look better wide a more narrow angle lens from a bit higher up.

the modelling and materials look pretty good.

hope this helps!

[priad]

thank's for your quick reply!
This really help me, effectively my bottle haven't thinkness.
about the angle I don't think that is a problem (this is just a quick render view).
the caustic multiplier=1 and the light intensity=1,
how can I tone down, perhaps you want to speak about the trash green color(I have a bad english and sometime I don't understand).
I will change this and repost an update.
Regards

[s0real]

i'd just turn down the caustic multiplier by about 75% and see what you get...

[priad]

update of this project.
I have turn down the caustic and affine the modeling.
What do you think about?
C&C please.

[cybling]

Looks much much nicer My only crit is the pointy bit sticking out for the hand grip, looks really sharp. Very look work. Love the plastic squeezer, nice SSS

[dennis]

looks very good now. maybe a more interesting color gradient for the background and some large bright reflections would help it further.

[s0real]

i think it's a big improvement. the plastic at the top looks great!

still not too keen on the wide angle though - i think it looks a bit close, giving it a warped perspective.

[tom182]

Looking good but should'nt the green liquid go to the edge of the bottle, like it does in the first image.
Tom

[s0real]

yes. it looks as if there is a gap between your liquid and the inside of the bottle.
vlado has just posted a tutorial about this...
http://www.chaoticdimension.com/foru...ic.php?t=11648
it might give you some tips on caustics as well!

[priad]

thanks for all comment.
Vlado make tutorial quickly (like lucky luke if you know! )
Great support!

[priad]

Here the first test in motion. forget the bad bubbles at the top.
With the vlado tips about the gap between liquid and plastic.
Thanks again Vlado, the best support team!

http://nicenoise.free.fr/film/anim%20spray.mov

[s0real]

pretty good!
not sure about the faded border though...
you kind of lose the details at the top a bit - how about changing the background colour?

i still think you need to zoom out a bit

[priad]

In fact there are some product to put on a web page.
An the background will be white, this is why the background and the fader border are near white.
I don't know how make it lisible at the top and with total white background.
This the dilem.
After I need to make an anim with the spray in action.
I need tips to make moved object animation.

[s0real]

it looks visible enough on the still shots - i think the fade occurs a bit too close to the object, that's why you're losing it a bit at the top... if you pull back a bit you'll be able to start the fade a bit farhter away from the object.

as for animating the spray, that's not something i know much about... you'd probably have to use dynamic particles or something if you want to make it look realistic?