Classic Style Interior

[jackieteh]

Hi,

This is my first 3d interior rendering with V-Ray 5, critiqs and comments are welcome.

[francomanko]

Just a few points.

1. Is this edge UV mapped correctly
2. maybe push the chair back slightly so the edge isnt overlapping the table. And the chair is faceted...subdivide it.
3. Same as 2..get a bit of separation from the entertainment table
4. this area is confusing, i cant tell straight away what the geo is.
5. I can see faceting...increase polycount
6. What are these?
7. Books seem very small, and cup looks like its about to fall off table.
8. Does the TV need to be on? And is it in correct position.
9. Base of chandelier is being lost a bit because of the end of that white panel on ceiling..can you lower/ raise it a touch?

[jackieteh]

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Just a few points.

1. Is this edge UV mapped correctly.
2. maybe push the chair back slightly so the edge isnt overlapping the table. And the chair is faceted...subdivide it.
3. Same as 2..get a bit of separation from the entertainment table - ok
4. this area is confusing, i can't tell straight away what the geo is.
5. I can see faceting...increase polycount
6. What are these?
7. Books seem very small, and cup looks like its about to fall off table.
8. Does the TV need to be on? And is it in correct position.
9. Base of chandelier is being lost a bit because of the end of that white panel on ceiling..can you lower/ raise it a touch?

1. Just check, you are correct the UV does not map properly.
2, 3. do I need to move the right chair also, it is overlapping with the table also, I have Turbosmooth on the chair, will turn up the subdiv level
4. - that is a column, I box up it with some design and lighting effect.
5. - noted with thanks.
6. It is an aluminium C Channel
7. - noted
8. - yes, the client required to switch it on and put on 3 idiot movie poster. and the tv position is in the same position as the client elevation.
9. I do not quite understand this?

Thank you or your time and comments.

[francomanko]

the chandelier, like with the chairs are just minor tweaks..try moving and see if you think it makes a difference. Theres nothing wrong with overlapping objects, i mean you could move the chair so its more overlapping (case no 2), its just because it the chair and table edges were right next to each other that it looked a bit odd. (again just a minor thing)

The white detracts from the edge of the chandelier, easy fix...but a minor one.

[jackieteh]

the chandelier, like with the chairs are just minor tweaks..try moving and see if you think it makes a difference. Theres nothing wrong with overlapping objects, i mean you could move the chair so its more overlapping (case no 2), its just because it the chair and table edges were right next to each other that it looked a bit odd. (again just a minor thing)

[URL=filedata/fetch?id=1106423&d=1615232359]The white detracts from the edge of the chandelier, easy fix...but a minor one.

Hi,

I am clear what you want to tell me now, thank you very much, I will try to fix all that. Thank you for your time and comments again.