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Hey everyone! We just released our new short film 'Paper Moon' and we'd love to get some feedback on it
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Story works very well and fits perfectly into the very short span of the piece.
It looks like it has been storyboarded with some care.
There are some great details and some really good character anim going on.
It does need some polish though, as I'm sure you know - but all the elements are there
I'd look at smoothing out the rather choppy camera movement...some is POV so cool, other bits a little distracting.
A little more love for the animation of the plane would also be good to see.
Quite simple things such as varying the trees/colours, randomising the grass placement...stuff like that...would really help sell it imo.
It's a compressed movie so a full res one would be good to see, to judge better the texture work.
Pretty fine job though, keep it up
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