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[priad]

Last project, a shop in shop concept.
C&C are welcome.

[percydaman]

looks nice. only crit is the overall lighting is just too "averaged out" looking to me. Some photoshop work to highlight certain areas would make it pop more....

[priad]

Thanks percy, you are right there is too much PS to hightlight some part.

I need new eyes on this please!
I don't know if I need shadows or other think to get it right.

[meanadam]

Too grey.
More falloff maps.

[priad]

I haven't any fallof maps.
It's to grey, ok thanks meanadam.
I 'don't think that is "THE" thing.

[jacksc02]

Looks good Priad,
The thing that I dont like about it is the samsung logos look really flat, maybe if the text was slighty raised off the blue?

[priad]

thanks again Percy and Jack
here others view with some change:

[RErender]

Hmm, maybe some more contrast? I would expect a display like this to make me squint, to "sparkle"...

[jacksc02]

I agree Eric.
I think you need to take it out of the "studio type" setup and move it into a more real world type lighting situation.
There should be some bright task lighting to contrast the overall lighting

[Aneurisma]

Did you do the design as well, or just visualization?!

Looks really cool!



PS: Just notice some crazy details on the domes displays (the vertical ones with an acrylic transparent dome) where it meets the white part, there are some GI artifacts, but you can photoshop it!

[priad]

thanks Eric
Chris, I don't know how I must to do
In this type of shop light comes from everywere and there are just a few light on the stand.
In fact there is a roof with many light and ........I really don't know how I can make it in a real lighting situation.

PS: this type of work is that I do always I make 4 of that in a week in general and I wish to found the right method to light this type of scene.
I this forum there is many interior with sun lighting etc...
But not enought totaly artificial lighting scene to learn.
I hope that someone could help me to found it
Do you have an idea?

PS: design is mine Aneurisma inspired by the samsung brandchart, thanks.

[trivision3d]

Looks nice....good atmosphere!!

Maarten



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