wip villa living room

[dominiquelaksmana]

hi friends,

this is a wip. please do comment... i need it to be better... thanks!
by the way the client asked me to make the thing look dreamy,
so there you go the glow....

[dominiquelaksmana]

anyway, this is the non glowing one...

[nvanherpt]

love it! i can see myself there.

does it sit in a big green paddock tho?

[marcoos]

looking good,

i think i prefer the first one, though i would tone down the glow a bit.

whats the object thats popping out over the right side of the nearest chair looks a bit distracting as it looks like a bit of the dining chair behind is invisible

also you coulds add some detail to the furniture maybe slightly chamfered edges or some piping on the edges etc

Good work

[dominiquelaksmana]

thanks for the replies friends,
i will look into that.

[shelsby]

good render looks great, my only crit would be to check the scaling of the fruit and coffee cup, they look a little large - thats it!!