New Chapel and link

[shelsby]

Hi everyone

Here are some stills from an animation project we are working on for a fundraising presentation. Still WIP so any C & C's would be appreciated.

Thanks

Steve

[cristoforo]

Not bad.....you need to get rid of the tiling effect in the bricks. The scale of the texture on the ceiling seems too big in the 3rd image. The computer screens need to be brighter. Does your animation walk directly in the building or does it fade from outdoor scene to indoor scene? I'm asking because I need to do a similar animation and do not know if there are any issues doing this with vray.

[jujubee]

My three crits - the floor and interior windows are too reflective. The bottom image walls are not connecting with the ceiling.

[s0real]

looking good, although some of the interiors are looking a little grey - grey computers, grey chairs, grey floor... maybe add some colour to those elements, even if it's just subtle i think it will help.

the model could also benefit from a few more detail (doorframes, windowframes, skirting etc...)

[olitech]

cool!

the reflective floor is not a bad thing...it actually looks like epoxy-resin...my only crit is that the vray lights in your windows should have a touch of blue (skylight colour)...it would bring some colour into the white rooms...it would also separate your natural light from your artificial light.

how about some camera correct on that first exterior?

[Robur]

Hi Steve, Nice roof - is it modeled or displaced?

Cheers

[shelsby]

Thanks for all your comments, which I have taken on board and will use to improve the images for the final animation.

In answer to some of your questions:-

Robur - the roof is modelled

olitech - you've hit the nail on the head - the floor is a poured grey resin, though i think i need to blur the reflections slightly for the finals.

s0real - I'll play around with some colours for the finals i think - does look a bit drab at the mo!

jujubee - your right about the walls and ceiling, there are a few bits of dodgy geometry in there I need to correct, i'll tweak the glass IOR a little also.

cristoforo - noted re the bricks and ceiling - will look at the screens also. I'm only going to going into the foyer from the outside so I haven't had too many issues, though I have had to play with the panel lights in terms of excluding certain geometry so it doesn't look wierd from the outside but still retains the light I require in the foyer.

All in all an interesting project - all done in 10 days inc rendering for about 2 mins of animation interlaced with some stills. The client loved it, and the presentation went very well - so the pressure is off for a week or 2, but I'll still need to finish it all off properly - I'll post the final ani when its done.

Thanks again

Steve