Bath room render-room for improvement?

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Bath room render-room for improvement?

Hi all,I had been doing interior render for a while now... recently I found that some how there's something lacking in my work(especially when I compare my work to some high quality render that I saw on this website),can't really tell it myself though...
the image below are done by me few month ago to do some light testing (not my design thoght)saw it on some magazine(can't seems to fine it now)....the setting are simple...just that I felt something is missing ...
I hope that you guys could give me a hand & point me towards a direction,I'll be very appreciate it ...thanks in advance..

Regards
Adam

[dominiquelaksmana]

frankly speaking, i don't really know how to improve this. because it's improved already. hehehe.....well, it's a nice rendering, real nice.
or, maybe you want to desaturate the glass on the wall to less greem perhaps. but that's subjective.
anyway, ride on man.

[jujubee]

Agreed- very hard to improve as it looks great. If you really want to be critical, the wood post could have reduced noise. Also, the second image doors look like light is blasting through a paper type of material - perhaps a background image would help.

[marcoos]

looks really good mate

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Hi guys(marcoos,dominiquelaksmana,jujubee)thanks for you C&C ,I'm very appreciate it.

dominiquelaksmana-I'll take your advise ,some how I couldn't see that spot before you mention it,I agree with you ,now that you mention I felt the colour are crashing with the general scene ambient .

jujubee-yes agree,I'm still looking for a image that can fit in to the background (still no luck),the wood post noise are create intentionally by adding a noise map to create a those old wood scratch surface ..apparently I didn't achieve what I was plan..

marcoos-thanks man

[fabrizio]

image is very good...curtains are perfect! how did you do ?


bye

[olitech]

Fantastic render!
However, due to the 'perfection' of everything else in the scene, the part that sticks out (to me=) is the metal housing on the ceiling fan...seems like you faked the reflection? It doesn't seem to look like 'vray' metal...again....a subjective comment, but that element seems to be interrupting the 'chi-flow' of the photo-reality of your image.

Meaning? lol...the image seems to 'float away' at the top due to the fact that the low contrast in the metal reflection at the top of the image doesn't balance the stronger contrast at the bottom of the image.

That fan is the key!

Try turning the diffuse colour of the metal to pure black. Your target metal colour should be (in the) reflection colour. Set your reflection IOR to 2.97...but that's nitpicking!

Also, i think the glass shelf looks perfect...if you desaturate it, the plant might steal the show.

[Da_elf]

sweet image

[mcphep]

This is very nice. Great details and lighting.

I think a background image would greatly improve the image, give it more depth. The door area generally looks to be of less detail than the rest of the scene. At the moment it is a large 'flat' area in the image. This could be addressed so that it is as highly detailed as the rest of the scene. I would also have a detail where the wall and floor meet, perhaps just a negative groove all the way around.

[TRGraphics]

Very nice work!

[Da_elf]

id like to make a protest. whats this "improvement" you speak of in the title. i see no room for it.