strawberrys

[jonnybefree]

hi again,
another project,
i'am not really happy with the strawberrys and lid,
but would like to hear your c&c's



best regards
jonas

[RErender]

Looks pretty good I think the strawberies could be a bit darker red and use a sharper highlight right now they look dried out. The lid looks too big for the jar and perhaps could use a stronger bevel on the bottom edge.

[roppin]

the jam in the jar is nice!
The strawberries could use som mor displacement I think and maybe to reflective? but they are on the way! The green on them seems a little letherish? to thick or something. the lid of the jar is somewhat sharp under, but maby thats the design,

/Daniel

[jonnybefree]

hi and thanks for the reply,
with the strawberrys its kind of a game, that they don't look like plastic, or mouldy.
the size of the lid is like the design says, but i will rounden it a bit more.

best greetings
jonas

[ene.xis]

it look s great so far, just get some wetty look on the strawberrys change the green material, and deform them a little maybe

the lid problem i think it s prespective-related...maybe if u change the camera angle a bit, it would look ok...

oh and some more 'moody' light would punch up ur image
great work!

[thablanch]

That looks great

The cover looks a little like carboard, don't know if it is more the texture or the shape that gives me that impression

What is the use of that.. Usually, when they are trying to sell fresh fruits on tv, there is a little water on them, I do not know if that would be right in this situation..

What is it reflecting , desk and chair, conference room

Great work

[andre]

i would tilt the perspective a little, so that you can see a bit of the top of the lid. and when you adjust the lid-geometry a little so that the side is not straight but a little bit bend outwards, you could probably catch a little hilite there + it would look a bit more natural.
the bump/displacement of the logo on the jar needs a higher resolution to avoid the jagged edges. the logo seem distorted as well, maybe adjust the mapping.
imho the strawberries should look a little more wet. a shell-material could bring you that extra wetness.
the jam looks very convincing.

good work,

andré

[DaForce]

how did you make the jam.. looks like it could be an interesting material.

[priad]

miammiam great job!!

[jonnybefree]

hi,
yes your right, will bring a more wet look in there for freshing it up.
the jam is a simple sss material with a noisy like map in transluence slot.
have to increase the resolution of displace-map.
and yes the hdri is a office , found no good kitchen.

so best regards
jonas