Funky Cool Loft - WIP - Need Critiques

[Jason Jacobs]

Hello V-Ray'ers,

Here is a current WIP. You know how it goes...been staring at it too long. I need some good critiques on materials and lighting. I'm aware of several of the faults, like the under-cabinet task lighting and the low-qual graininess. Hit me with your best shot -- fire away.

Thanky!

[jujubee]

Insane render. Excellent.

[siliconbauhaus]

it sucks mate :P

[Jason Jacobs]

Thanks for the in-depth critiques, guys! :P

Seriously tho - thanks for the comments.

[animagic]

There does not seem to be a frame on the door (wood and 3 lite glass)

[djembe]

Man, that's inspiring! Great work!
I love the light bloom around the windows.

[geoff]

Hello Jason.
Very nice lighting and materials.
But........
This has alway bothered me
Having the lights on in the daytime!
Surely there would be enough natural light coming in reality!
I just find those chairs in the foreground lit up by the pendant lamps a bit distracting.
Put the lights on for a night shot. That would be awesome.

Love the details like the ducting and clutter on the worktop btw

Geoff

[thablanch]

This is a really nice piece..

geoff: I do agree with you, lights on in daytime is odd, but that's what most clients wants, even if you explain them that's not correct. I my oppinion, that's one of the hardest parts to do, good balance in between natural lignt and artificial light.

[Syclone1]

OMG nice job

-dave

[tigerX]

Hi Jason, very nice render that , my only comment: is there no door frame or skirting? Maybe not. Great stuff tho.
Dougie

[jhiler]

how long did it take you to render that and at what size?

the image looks great!

[nvanherpt]

looks finished to me.

one thing, the seat on the dining chairs looks quite deep? almost as deep as they are high.

[dellis]

You're logo is cool...it just ocurred to me the....3 D's!