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  • Suuny day

    Hi guys,
    recent wip. just another residential/commercial block nothing out of the ordinary... except the lovely sunny day I took the photo.... which for Belfast is quite unusual. All c&c welcome,

    Cheers
    TD

    "where's my bottle of red"




  • #2
    fantastic work. not much to crit really.
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    "Sometimes life leaves a hundred dollar bill on your dresser, and you don't realize until later that it's because it fu**ed you."

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    • #3
      Cheers Percy,
      Nobodys ever mentioned the word fantastic in relation to any of my work before .......I'm all chuffed.

      Cheers
      TD

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      • #4
        That looks great Tom, is the building on the right real?
        one tiny thing, should the shadows from the trees originate at their base?
        HDRI enviro+1 Direct light?
        great work, well done
        Tom
        Accept that some days you are the pigeon, and some days you are the statue.

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        • #5
          Nice work Tom. It's pretty close...just a few minor things that would fix it to the photo:
          1. The people in shade and the people in direct sun light seem to have the same amount of light on them. A little photoshop work woul correct this.

          2. Shadows on the trees. Zero out your shadow bias. Also the green on the trees seem too saturated and a better bark texture on the trunks.

          3. The glass is too even light on shadow and sunny side as well at the base. You would think that the reflections on the sunny side would be much stronger than the side in shade. At the moment it reads a bit flat.

          4. The shady side needs to be more purple. Check out the colour in shade of the adjoining building...esp the white areas - they have a purple cast. Also look at the shadows ont he ground. Your shadey side is more blue than purple.

          These are fairly minor. Overall it is good work. Congrats.
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          Vu Nguyen
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