Residential Exterior

[shelsby]

Hi Everyone,

If anyone could make some suggestions on how to improve this image, I would be most grateful

Thanks

Steve

[jow]

Nice work Steve, you could maybe render it in 1.5 using a Vray camera so you can use the Distortion feature to get some nice curving on the building walls....

[dominiquelaksmana]

very nice.
but please get rid of the potted plants.
that's all i guess....

cheers

[mcvltd]

Great image! The only thing I can think of is some undulations on the grass surface. Otherwise it's damn good.

[base2studios]

i'd move the camera position up or down slightly as the benches are reading a little oddly. Took me a second to figure out exactly what was going on there, but we're all a little slow in TX....hehe. I'd also expect to see a little more relfection in your glass. Great work!

[siliconbauhaus]

nice image mate.....I have my doubts on the structure for the balconies ?

[shelsby]

thanks for the comments everyone, I'll try to update the image inline with some of them.

Silicon - your right about the decking structures - I should really add some more steelwork and I probably will if I get the time; the client hasn't picked up on it at all!!

steve

[shelsby]

Here are some other shots from the same development. Both are the same angle, but different lighting. I've added extra beams to the decking structure for support as suggested.

Comments would be most welcome

Thanks

Steve

[PixelJockey]

Sweet renders. The lighting is great. You might want to deflate the handrail a bit. A 2" diameter pipe should do fine. Especially with that type of rail system. Oh, and you'll need a beam running the length of the wall to support the decking.

[Clifton Santiago]

sweet brick map and lighting. Bump map or displacement?

[claude_tnt]

nice renders......
the plants on the top floor looks like "push'n peng"....


davis

[LucidV]

Great Renders... I can't think of anything except have you considered adding people to bring a human intrest to the composition? It may help it seem a little more lived in.
Awesome work though.

[siliconbauhaus]

lovely images mate.

talking structure wise again, you'd have to put a sus sturcture from beam to beam because of the way your decking is going as it wouldnt span that distance.

[Andre Tobo]

The lighting is great - > dayshots are very good!

my comments to check is to try some camera correction and this lens flare on night view...

Great job

[voltron7]

Great lighting and materials...only crits are cameras and brick texture. Maybe make night shot darker... But really nice work, I love the glass system, rendering quality, and modeling is great!