harbour flat

[jonnybefree]

hi all,
long time nothing postet here, so this is a small project i'am working on.
3 days with modelling, lighting......

like to hear your comments.



best regards
Jonas

[DaForce]

Looks nice mate!!

But the glow on the left wall is too strong IMO and maybe put a thin black board around the displacement map to stick the edges of the carpet down.

Really nice tho, how is it light? vraysun/sky , hdr ??

[nvanherpt]

looks sweet.

my twopence: as you are immediately drawn to the window and view i would make the background slightly out of focus and add some reflections on the glass.

[visumporec]

Nice Image... Can you describe your settings?

[jonnybefree]

thanks for your comments.

will fix the carpet daforce. its Vray-sun, skydome with Vray sky mapped.
thats all.

as for the background, the client wanted to have a look out of the window, because its the nub for selling the flat. so i think i have no chance.

best regards
Jonas

[alexthg]

Awesome man!

Really love the subtle lighting from vraysun/sky...

The only thing i hate is... well... the background image . The view is not that pretty, and it doesn't really 'sell' that much IMO...
well, a client's wish...

the glow on the left wall, was it done in post?

Regards

[jonnybefree]

The view is not that pretty

ok, i've don't heard that. its the harbour of hamburg, the place where i've been grown up. so the lovely'st place i know!

yes the glow is post, as daforce said its a bit too much, i'll fix it.

thanks for you comment

[Candelero]

Congrats, jonny !
The render has a strong feeling , not just a render.

The only doubt i have: i am missing the flower shadow on the wall, where the sun rays fall. Maybe wrong of course.

Best regards,
nikki Candelero

[ene.xis]

The only doubt i have: i am missing the flower shadow on the wall, where the sun rays fall. Maybe wrong of course.

ur right...must have disapeared with all the glowin going on in that corner!
hehe

Very nice light!
good athmosphere overall...just get rid of those splotches on the window frame and...well that background seems a little off....

[jonnybefree]

thanks a lot

here a little update.



there's no glow in post, but flowers shadow is blown out anyway.

best greetings
Jonas

[nvanherpt]

really nice now!

sure you don't want to add a little reflection in the glass?

[jonnybefree]

hehehe,
there're allready reflections, but it seems that they also dond't like the harbour of hamburg.

[tom schuelke]

Baa,,

you think this is nice ?

whats that... ? Horizon to low, i little to bluish the light, and the blown away shadow of the plants and missing reflection...

only nice thing here, the photo of my loved harbour in hamburg...




Tom

[jonnybefree]

horizont to low? i don't think so. its the end of hamburg there, and there isn't anymore outside! isn't it?

but i think i stop to contradict my chef now.

[Morbid Angel]

imo this is a very good render. Yes with some issues, but non the less.