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    Hi All,

    Just finished this image for Sales Brochure. Any comments welcome.

    Trev



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    The noise bothers me a little.... I understand what you are trying to do, but it doesn't look correct. Good image ohterwise.
    Bobby Parker
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    • #3
      You might want to work on your pavement tiling.
      "Why can't I build a dirigible with my mind?"

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      • #4
        Looking good. The Stucco and roof on the back structure look a little blochy (volume fog?). The color variation on the pavement is distracting.
        Mapping seems a little off on the pavement aswell.
        Mike Henry
        http://mhenry.cgsociety.org/gallery/

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        • #5
          I agree with the paving comment....and the cars seem out of place...maybe due to the lighting.

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          • #6
            i think the composition is a little bit empty on the left corner... maybe some foreground objects would help to 'frame' and focus the image (a tree?)

            for the background sky... i think it's too lowres... seems like a zoomed in cloud photo
            Harry G

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