wip

[alexstudiox]

Hi all,

Just getting into vray. Here are is a wip.
Comments and crits welcomed.

Thanks

[img]http://show.imagehosting.us/show/1631159/42960/

user_42960/T0_42960_1631159.jpg[/img]

[dlparisi]

Here's the image. You had spaces in the link...


IMO the figure is really distracting, she's the blackest thing by far in the image and really stands out. Otherwise it's coming along good for a WIP.

[Dynedain]

Another comment about the woman... notice the stuff on your table is almost a sillouette because of the light coming through the window, but the woman's features are as clear as if she was in a studio.... that's a big reason why she stands out. She should be essentially a sillouette as well.

[glorybound]

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I agree with the women being distracting.. I also don't know if the volumetric light works for this scene...., but just my opinion. Other that I like the image... really good mapping... I don't see any tiling.

[alexstudiox]

thanks

Thanks for fixing that dlparisi, I was wondering why I could not see it.

I totally agree with you all about the woman, that is driven by the client not I.
but I will try to put her in sillouette to see what it looks like or just take her out.

the light effect was something I didnt even notice, that was done in DF, I am going to take that out.

thanks for the help

alex

[DaForce]

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