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  • Ambiance Promethée

    Hi all .
    Long time without posting anythings, so here it is.
    I would like to here comments and crits on this one.
    what do you think about it?

    PS: new avatar new work! hehehe




    and a bigger one:

    http://nicenoise.free.fr/vray%20forum/grospic.jpg
    =:-/
    Laurent

  • #2
    Wow! Really nice.

    Once thing I noticed was the levitating chandileer.... shouldn't it be hanging from a chain or something?

    The GI where the ceiling beams hit the wall seems a little soft too...

    Apart from that its pretty darn perfect!
    Patrick Macdonald
    Lighting TD : http://reformstudios.com Developer of "Mission Control", the spreadsheet editor for 3ds Max http://reformstudios.com/mission-control-for-3ds-max/



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    • #3
      Wow. Did you model everything yourself? I'm looking at this image on a computer at school and my classmates an I all think its really great

      There's just one thing I thought about your image:

      I think some of the furnature (like the metal-lined tables, couches and bar stools) are a little to contemporary for this scene. If you really wanted to make things shine, I would use some nice leather sofas or something and some wood tables, just to give your scene a more classic feel.

      But do what you think best. I have little room to talk 'cause I am a student and I have never made anything that complex.

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      • #4
        thanks you,
        Re-Form: thanks, I don't think the candelier is flying, yes I have problem with GI on the ceiling and moulding.

        elitesouljah: Thanks, I haven't modeled all myseft , some archmodels here because two days work for all
        =:-/
        Laurent

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        • #5
          Sorry for being hypercritical (you did ask for crits ) ...

          the wire that the chandeleer hangs from seems too thin to support the weight.... but maybe I'm wrong. It looks like a power cable, which would be taut if it was supporting the weight of the light.

          2 days? .... crazy!
          Patrick Macdonald
          Lighting TD : http://reformstudios.com Developer of "Mission Control", the spreadsheet editor for 3ds Max http://reformstudios.com/mission-control-for-3ds-max/



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          • #6
            hehe noprob with this, the chandelier is hanging by a litle cable, an invisible cable in the center.
            =:-/
            Laurent

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            • #7
              hi
              very nice work. I like ur lighting

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              • #8
                Great Job on the modeling and the lighting, but there is one thing that jumps out at me and that's all the light leaking on the back wall with the windows. Around the sashes that are holding the curtains back and the lower base board and the bottom of the column in the far right corner.

                -dave
                Cheers,
                -dave
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                • #9
                  cooooool, can i ask what glass material you used on the chandelier?

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                  • #10
                    Very nice. The only distracting thing is the background. I think it needs to be brighter, or overexposed to look correct based on the amount of sunlight coming in.

                    Or maybe it just looks washed out and needs some contrast...
                    "Why can't I build a dirigible with my mind?"

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                    • #11

                      modeling wise: amazing job gr8 details no flaws on my eye!
                      color wise: amazing again! gr8 colour pallete!

                      ok lightning and mood wise: i like the very dimed volumetric feeling. but ithe GI to me looks a bit water clour mood...it lacks some detail...(i must say i m a QMC fanboy, so...)


                      again this is a gr8 piece nevertheless...i m just too picky!
                      Nuno de Castro

                      www.ene-digital.com
                      nuno@ene-digital.com
                      00351 917593145

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                      • #12
                        very nice. i think the overall reading is very accurate; i actually think the exterior looks perfect, and i think your choice of simple contemporary furniture complements the ornate classical details.
                        i was wondering the same thing as syclone1, what is causing those bright light leaks around the sashes and base of colomn. there also appears to be a bit of a glow coming from behind the column next to the doorway.

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                        • #13
                          looks great, can't add anymore then the comments so far.
                          You're very good at adding detail.
                          like the Klimt BTW

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                          • #14
                            Very nice Priad.
                            Its improved nicely from what you showed me on MSN.
                            I love the buttery colored lighting.

                            I must ask... the curtains.. how did you model those.. the details around the top and the randomness is really good!!!

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                            • #15
                              great laurent... great...
                              Dominique Laksmana

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