LOBBY

[dominiquelaksmana]

my latest,
c&c are welcome.
viewing angle is requested by client.

[greg04]

some harsh bumb on those tiles and the light/?/ on the upper left does not convince me.
the viewing angle is really funky, and did you say the client wanted it?

[dominiquelaksmana]

ya the client wants it more dramatic.(or maybe he wants to pay 1 visual only, instead of 2.. my choice, his decission, well... something like that.

[jacksc02]

you have some bad tiling of materials on the marble and the onyx stone.

[Marshall_Craft]

I'm having trouble understanding what's going on in the lower right to middle area of the image where there seems to be a piece of white marble either stepping up or floating over the ground (I can't tell which yet.) My eyes might be playing tricks on me, but it's almost M.C. Esher-esc.

One other thing (trying not to repeat others' comments,) why does the tree not have any foliage? Is this just for visibility of the conference room in the background?

- Alex

[GALACTUS]

I think it is floating and is under lit. One of the most annoying things is when you have the perfect render and the client comes in with his own opinions and just ruins the whole shot Aaarrrggh!

A part of me knows that the only reason he is fiddling is because he knows you created it and it not real, were as if a photographer came back with it you would not hear the accursed client say oh the ceiling is too dark or i cant see the this or that.

sorry for the rant.

comments aside i like the image.

[RErender]

I'm having trouble understanding what's going on in the lower right to middle area of the image where there seems to be a piece of white marble either stepping up or floating over the ground (I can't tell which yet.) My eyes might be playing tricks on me, but it's almost M.C. Esher-esc.

One other thing (trying not to repeat others' comments,) why does the tree not have any foliage? Is this just for visibility of the conference room in the background?

- Alex

The foreground slab is a desktop, it is just lined up with the floor inset, it would be better if they were offset a bit, or at least had a leg there to hold it up.

[MHenry]

Lighting Looks good. The image overall looks streched (maybe a tiling problem).

[zeilveen]

Funky image if you ask me, just a little too much here and there. The top right light is a bit too hard and the perspective plays tricks with the white marble stuff and the right.

But very nice!