Loft Interiors

[digtlpete]

This is my first time posting any of my work here so I thought I would see what everyone thinks. Any C&C is appreciated. These still were done with Max9.0 and Vray1.5 RC3 done with LWF and render passes.

Thanks,
Brian

[cs_sean]

They look really nice. I would only have a couple of crits:

There is some tiling in the tiles behind the cooktop (especially in the second one).

And overall, they seem a little washed out, and evenly lit. If you look at the background cityscape, there is a rich contrast and color variation. But the interiors lack that same contrast. The areas deeper in from the windows would be darker...or at least lit more by the interior lights and less by the outside sun.

That's my two cents. I really like the space.

[rmejia]

They look very nice !

[dbuchhofer]

they look good, a great start, but don't neglect your Photoshop for tweaking! an easy minute to finish them off sexy-like. hope you don't mind, I'll take em down if you want

[Candelero]

@ digtlpete
Very nice. I like them. The feeling is good.
Welcome to the forum



@ dbuchhofer
Are you forgetting something ?

Best regards,
nikki Candelero

[priad]

Nice work, and welcome to the forum
@Nikki: may be black border "Candelero copyright"

[Candelero]

Nice work, and welcome to the forum
@Nikki: may be black border "Candelero copyright"

A border, but in this case, NOT black.
20px pure White would just SHINE On...



Best regards,
nikki Candelero

[ene.xis]

nice work!
i really like the first one...
and yes the white borders would rock!

[digtlpete]

Thankyou everyone for all of your comments, they are all very helpfull.

@cs-sean and dbuchofer- When I set out to do these renderings I wanted to keep the lighting soft, but after seeing the images with a little more contrast I kind of like the result. Of course I will have to adjust in combustion so I can maintain the color integrity of the textures. Thanks again- very helpfull.

@Candelero and Priad- I like the idea of the borders. I will post an update with adjustments and borders. Thanks for the idea.

-Brian

[digtlpete]

Here are a few updates-






Thanks again for any comments.

-Brian

[DaForce]

Nice renders!!

Although personally I would like to see abit more contrast, a little hit with my S-Curve in PS, brought out the colors just that little bit more.
But thats just personal preference

Well done.

[Dynedain]

I like them, but I think the artificial lighting takes away too much contrast and compositionally makes the images seem noisy.

Also, I would turn on just a tiny bit of camera distortion so that the perspective lines aren't so sharp and unnatural as they get close to the frame (because of your wide angle camera)

[digtlpete]

Thanks for the additional comments!

@Dynedain- I agree with your comments on the artificial lighting. It seems like it is always the case that our clients want all of the lights turned on it the space. I guess I could tone them way back so that they don't have much of an effect. This is something I will keep in mind on future projects. If I decide to re-rerender these I will give a little camera distortion a shot.

@DaForce- Thanks for your comments as well. I guess I need to take off the pink panties and give the freak'n images more contrast. :P

[MHenry]

Sweet Renderings!