Terrace

[shelsby]

Hi everyone, this is my first attempt using LWF and the vray sun/sky. I've been putting it off and off...but finally got time to experiment a little. Any comments on how to improve would be very wlecome

Thanks

Steve

[DaForce]

Looks pretty good. Now thats a place with a view


Something funny about that background tho.. cant put my finger on it.

[Erik de Graaf]

Very nice indeed.

LOL daforce, you are always the first to regognize these kind of details aren't you? But you know what they say: A dirty mind is a joy forever!

[tom182]

these kind of details

????

Hmm tell me Eric what do you see there (in a Freudian tone)



Nice work by the way, like the textures on the white walls.

Tom

[DaForce]

lol yeah im kinda curious what you mean as well Eric.. haha
Im not sure what dirty details you thought I was refering too, seems like maybe you were the one to recognize them first

[MHenry]

Steve,

Very nice rendering!

[EricCamper]

Welll...I saw it right away....Perhaps he was referring to the railing. The connectors that hold the glass in place in the middle of the yellow sky sort of have a twigs and berries look. LOL.....But maybe it's just me

[DaForce]

hahahah yes

[Seraph135]

Looks pretty good! I think however that the background images perspective does not match the forground CG elements and thus makes the scene feel like its tipping over. Here is a paint over showing where the horizon should be if you follow your perspective lines to their vanishing point.



Tim J

[Erik de Graaf]

Haha, maybe it IS me! :P , but hey, i stand by my words, it really is a joy to have a dirty mind.

But when i see Daforce make a remark about something funny i start to look for something funny, still no excuse. Help me dr. Freud i think i need help .

[Jason Jacobs]

Beautimus! I agree about that horizon line. You always get the coolest projects.

[tigerX]

Thats a great image Steve!

[MoonDoggie]

Excellent work! Is that a comped in sky in PS? using the saturation and colors from the vraysky?

-Colin

[shelsby]

Looks pretty good! I think however that the background images perspective does not match the forground CG elements and thus makes the scene feel like its tipping over. Here is a paint over showing where the horizon should be if you follow your perspective lines to their vanishing point.

Tim J

Thanks for pointing that out Tim - I'll try to rectify that and post an update.

Moondoggie - the sky and background is a photograph mapped onto a plane and lit independantly from the rest of the scene using an omni light.

[shelsby]

Looks pretty good! I think however that the background images perspective does not match the forground CG elements and thus makes the scene feel like its tipping over. Here is a paint over showing where the horizon should be if you follow your perspective lines to their vanishing point.


Tim J

Hi everyone

Here is an update with the horizon postion modified in line with Tims's suggestion.

Thanks

Steve