a new exteriors I'm working on

[pengo]

something I working on now
Ceitiques and comments please

[DaForce]

Looks quite nice.

What time of day and weather conditions are you aiming for?
Reason I ask is there is basically no presence of any sunlight, well maybe a little but its so diffuse/soft you can hardly tell. As you can see by the shadow under the chairs.

I would prefer this to be on a clear sunny day, i.e. more inviting and warm. As its somewhat cold and clammy at the moment.

[Ryan_Chiong]

critics
1. UVW mapping on the wood furniture.
2. the trees doesnt fit into the scene. they have sharp shadows from strong sunlight.
3. evermotion models are too stiff. you might wanna put some bumps or dispalcements to it.
4. check alignment of grout at chimney-wall.

i agree with the force.

i wouldnt jump into the pool in a cold weather.

Ryan

[pengo]

I tryed to recreate a strange evening situation in weather and time there is no sun is hdri map only
like the original was strange too

I started from the photo to model the villa without any reference except it and that what I got

thanks for the reply I'l try to do modifies

[Paul Oblomov]

Lovely!
Maybe will try to render smth too

[thablanch]

Nice mood in the evening shot, quite interesting