wip exterior

[dominiquelaksmana]

hi fellas,
need to make this better,
please hint a pointer or two,
thanks!
ps:
(i know, looks like this building is at the edge of the world, should've raised the horizon a bit)

[Da_elf]

where did you get your trees

[glorybound]

edge of the world

those are evermotion trees. I love it... you already mentioned lowering the camera.

[DaForce]

Looks pretty good to me.
Trees are nice too.

I personally would like to see a shot looking up at the building from say human height.

Good work

[visumporec]

...just litle contrast, for me looks nice

[priad]

Great render ,
too much post glow (PS layer work I suppose?) IMO

[marcoos]

looks great, the tiling of the water catches my eye a bit, but otherwise good stuff

[Neilg]

I'm voting kill the glow too, its quite nice otherwise.

[add101]

i like the glow. how was it produced? photoshop?
render looks great!
i agree about the water falling over the edge. i guess in reality it wouldn't be that visible- the infinity pool (unless that's the actual tile on the pool?)

[prey1979]

nice image!

what trees are using? where they rendered seperatly? huge performance hit?


(my bad just noticed they are mentioned as Evermotion trees)


keep up the good work!

[dominiquelaksmana]

Thanks a lot for the replies and comments.

yes tree are from evermotion

daforce : mate, client declined my proposal to lower the viewing angle.

Priad: yes i think the glow is too much. let me lower the glow level

marcoos : will try work on that one

cubicle gangster : will reduce the glow.

add101 : just copy the layer, gaussian blur it, and change mode to screen
and adjust the level

thanks everyone,

[rmejia]

Looks done to me! Nice work

[dominiquelaksmana]

thanks for the help fellas,
this is the final result.
hope this is better.
my eyes are starting to play tricks on me for looking at this image
too often :P

[Erik de Graaf]

Cool building, that swimming pool would scare the shit out of me though. I am afraid of heights and this pool looks like it can go over the edge at any time.

The two cars at the bottom with the black windows don't benefit the image, next time make them more like the audi.

Great image though!

Erik

[dominiquelaksmana]

that's because the car doesn't have anything inside erik. i am out of library :P
thanks for the comment. i'll do the inside for the next time