Lake Home II

[glorybound]

Hello,

Any suggestions would be appreciated.

[RErender]

The house and the car look pretty good, not sure whats holding up the roof though on the left corner.

The greens of the landscape are all a little off, the grass could be greener and have some more variation
and specularity, The hedges by the entry are too green, could move towards olive a bit. The tree by the garage
is a bit to green too.

[dlparisi]

The house and the car look pretty good, not sure whats holding up the roof though on the left corner.

Same thing holding this one up ...


As for the render, rerender's right about the green saturation levels. If you can swing it, I think the house needs a little more room on it's ends, it feels a little tight and you're cutting off the roof on the right hand side. Related point is I personally don't like the trees framing the image-especially the one on the right where you see the bottom of the trunk and the top of the trunk and then some branches. I'd rather see the entire trunk (away from the edge of frame) or I'd push it over more and just have the orerarcing branches in frame.
I also don't like the birds on the front lawn, kind of distracting. The three main textures (siding, stone and roof) need a little work as they look a little flat (maybe more bump or possibly disp.). The boulders and drapes are a nice touch though. Nice image, it just needs a little tweaking.

BTW, the front doors look a little small or the garage doors look too big to me.

[RErender]

Same thing holding this one up ...

I know it is structurally feasible, just seems like an odd design choice.

[gilicom]

good work.
change the over green hedges and tree and it will be better.

[ruffstuff]

The house is a bit hard to see since it's in half shadow. If the house is what your selling, lighten up under those roof hangovers.

Also, the 2 trees that "tickle" the edge seem to have shadows that don't go inthe same direction.They both fall into the middle of the image. (Maybe it's an illusiuons, but it looks weird.)

[glorybound]

Lake Home II update

Here is an updated image.

[tct70]

Looks good. I think the areas in shadow are too dark though.

[glorybound]

Lake Home

How would you suggest I brighten the shadows up without blowing out everything else? I come accross this every now an then, but my setup is usually the same.

[tct70]

Image>Adjust>Shadow/Highlight in Photshop.

[glorybound]

Dark Shadows

That was my first thought, but anything I can do in the model?

[glorybound]

Dark Shadows

Tweaked highlights in PS

[MHenry]

Hey Bobby,

Render is looking really good. My only suggestion would be to add some "vartiation" (cracks, pebbles, etc) to your driveway. It looks a little to flat to me in comparison to other elements of your render.

You might try using the noise filter in photoshop (make sure monochrome is selected).

[glorybound]

Lake Home

Oops... I forgot that this time. Thanks for the reminder

[dominiquelaksmana]

MY MY... THAT LOOKS REALLY GOOOD